Tangled Trails: A Western Detective Story — Context and Discussion
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She was a young, soft creature, very pretty in a kittenish fashion, both sensuous and helpless. It was an easy guess that unless fortune stood her friend she was a predestined victim to the world's selfish love of pleasure, and fortune, with a cynical smile, had stood aside and let her go her way.
"I . . . I . . ." A wave of color flooded her face. She twisted a rag of a handkerchief into a hard wadded knot.
"Spit it out," he ordered curtly.
"I've got to do something . . . soon. Won't you--won't you--?" There was a wail of despair in the unfinished sentence.
James Cunningham was a grim, gray pirate, as malleable as cast iron and as soft. He was a large, big-boned man, aggressive, dominant, the kind that takes the world by the throat and shakes success from it. The contour of his hook-nosed face had something rapacious written on it.
"No. Not till I get good and ready. I've told you I'd look out for you if you'd keep still. Don't come whining at me. I won't have it."
Already he was ripping letters open and glancing over them. Tears brimmed the brown eyes of the girl. She bit her lower lip, choked back a sob, and turned hopelessly away. Her misfortune lay at her own door. She knew that. But-- The woe in her heart was that the man she had loved was leaving her to face alone a night as bleak as death.
Cunningham had always led a life of intelligent selfishness. He had usually got what he wanted because he was strong enough to take it. No scrupulous nicety of means had ever deterred him. Nor ever would. He played his own hand with a cynical disregard of the rights of others. It was this that had made him what he was, a man who bulked large in the sight of the city and state. Long ago he had made up his mind that altruism was weakness.
He went through his mail with a swift, trained eye. One of the letters he laid aside and glanced at a second time. It brought a grim, hard smile to his lips. A paragraph read:
There's no water in your ditch and our crops are burning up. Your whole irrigation system in Dry Valley is a fake. You knew it, but we didn't. You've skinned us out of all we had, you damned bloodsucker. If you ever come up here we'll dry-gulch you, sure.
The letter was signed, "One You Have Robbed." Attached to it was a clipping from a small-town paper telling of a meeting of farmers to ask the United States District Attorney for an investigation of the Dry Valley irrigation project promoted by James Cunningham.
The promoter smiled. He was not afraid of the Government. He had kept strictly within the law. It was not his fault there was not enough rainfall in the watershed to irrigate the valley. But the threat to dry-gulch him was another matter. He had no fancy for being shot in the back. Some crazy fool of a settler might do just that. He decided to let an agent attend to his Dry Valley affairs hereafter. He dictated some letters, closed his desk, and went down the street toward the City Club. At a florist's he stopped and ordered a box of American Beauties to be sent to Miss Phyllis Harriman. With these he enclosed his card, a line of greeting scrawled on it.
A poker game was on at the club and Cunningham sat in. He interrupted it to dine, holding his seat by leaving a pile of chips at the place. When he cashed in his winnings and went downstairs it was still early. As a card-player he was not popular. He was too keen on the main chance and he nearly always won. In spite of his loud and frequent laugh, of the effect of bluff geniality, there was no genuine humor in the man, none of the milk of human kindness.
A lawyer in the reading-room rose at sight of Cunningham. "Want to see you a minute," he said.
"Let's go into the Red Room."
He led the way to a small room furnished with a desk, writing supplies, and a telephone. It was for the use of members who wanted to be private. The lawyer shut the door.
"Afraid I've bad news for you, Cunningham," he said.
The other man's steady eyes did not waver. He waited silently.
"I was at Golden to-day on business connected with a divorce case. By chance I ran across a record that astonished me. It may be only a coincidence of names, but--"
The novel opens not with a gunshot but with a secretary's desperate plea and a businessman's cold refusal. James Cunningham, described as a 'grim, gray pirate' with a 'hook-nosed face,' dominates the first scene through harsh commands and a swivel-chair posture. Raine establishes tension through physical detail—the twisted handkerchief, the 'wail of despair' in an unfinished sentence—before the narrative shifts to a lunch counter where Kirby Lane and Rose McLean discuss Esther's secret. The voice alternates between urban curtness and western drawl, as when Kirby says 'I'm goin' out to Golden to-day on a queer wild-goose chase.'
Dialogue as a Tool for Pacing
Raine accelerates or stalls the plot through the rhythm of conversation. In the opening, Cunningham's barked 'Spit it out' and 'No. Not till I get good and ready' create a staccato beat that mirrors his dominance. Later, Kirby's exchange with Rose at the lunch counter uses longer, softer sentences—'Have you found out anything more yet about—the man?'—to slow the pace and signal intimacy. The dialogue often carries subtext: when Kirby says 'I've made a mistake. I told James I was comin' here to-day,' the clipped admission compresses a failed strategy into a single breath. Raine also uses interruptions and unfinished lines, such as 'I . . . I . . .' and 'Won't you—won't you—?' to convey hesitation and urgency without exposition.
Setting as a Switch in Narrative Speed
The story moves between confined interiors and open landscapes, each altering the tempo. The opening office scene is static, with Cunningham 'leaned back in his swivel chair' and Esther 'twist[ing] a rag of a handkerchief.' The pace picks up when Kirby and Rose take the interurban to Golden: the prose shifts to motion—'rushed past truck farms and apple orchards'—and the description of 'the mellow bath of a summer sun' provides a brief lyrical pause. The courthouse steps introduce a sudden acceleration: Jack Cunningham 'ran down the steps . . . stepped into the car . . . reached for the starter, threw in the clutch, and gave the engine gas.' The chase is implied through action verbs rather than interior thought, compressing time.
Voice and Character Through Word Choice
Raine differentiates characters by diction and syntax. Cunningham speaks in blunt commands: 'Don't come whining at me. I won't have it.' Kirby uses western colloquialisms—'mebbe,' 'queer wild-goose chase,' 'beat us to it'—that mark him as an outsider to the city's power games. Rose's speech mixes tenderness and practicality: 'She's so lovable. That's been her ruin.' The narrator's own voice occasionally adopts a literary register—'a predestined victim to the world's selfish love of pleasure'—but pulls back into concrete observation: 'The contour of his hook-nosed face had something rapacious written on it.' These shifts in register create a layered narrative voice that moves between omniscient commentary and scene-bound reporting.
Readers should attend to how Raine uses physical objects—a handkerchief, a car, a marriage license list—as both clues and pace-setters. The story's western detective label promises action, but the early chapters invest heavily in conversational standoffs and withheld information. Notice how the author balances the cowboy idiom of Kirby with the clipped urbanity of the Cunninghams; this linguistic friction drives the mystery as much as any plot device.
That old Denver story stayed with me because its suspicion never shouts—it settles quietly, like dust on a saddle. I kept thinking about how the secret works in both, the way people hold their breath around things unsaid. The same hush lives in "No Clue!": A Mystery Story — Text and Context, where even the quiet feels burdened. I finished it and just sat there, remembering.
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